This pain drives me, strikes me, hides me!
I see this red, glimmer of the dead, everything has been said!
I hope you can run, I will help you be gone, please don't load the gun!
I clench my teeth, clamp my plea's, this voilence he can keep!
I wrote, I showed, I hoped, and I grow!
You vent, I lend the hand for the rant,
you hoped, change is lost, walk from the show!
Walk away from the field, leave this veil!
Stop the excuses, love doesn't equal abuse!
Talking doesn't touch face it will not bevel the edge!
My hand is out now, take it and go...
I can't stand this out alone, no hope...
We can walk away, leave this pain today...
But you need to grasp, hold and glance...
The glimmer of hope beyond the red glow!
I need you to see, be, run with me!
Open your eye's, leave the lies!
Pink and black, blue and bruised!
These colors don't match, can't stand that!
My hand is out now, take it and go...
I can't stand this out alone, no hope...
We can walk away, leave this pain today...
But you need to grasp, hold and glance...
Walk away before it is too late,
leave this before you regret the taste,
tip of the tongue will be the waste,
save your words for the one's you hate...
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